Gcina
Mhlophe
Born
in Hammarsdale , Kwa-Zulu-Natal, she matriculated at the Mfundesweni High
School. She is known as South Africa’s
premier story teller.
The toilet
Sometimes I wanted to give
up and be a good girl who listened to her elders. Maybe I should have done
something like teaching or nursing as my mother wished. People thought these
professions were respectable, but I knew I wanted something different, though I
was not sure what. I thought a lot about acting…
My mother said that it had been a waste of good money educating me,
because I did not know what to do with the knowledge I had acquired (got).
I’d come to Johannesburg for the December holidays after writing my Matric
exams, and then stayed on, hoping to find something to do. My elder sister
worked in Orange Grove as a domestic worker, and I stayed with her in her back
room. I didn’t know anybody in Jo’burg except my sister’s friends, with whom we
went to church. The Methodist Church up Fourteenth Avenue was about the only
outing we had together. I was very bored and lonely.
On weekdays,
I was locked in my sister’s room so that
the Madam (employer; not much used now) wouldn’t see me.
She was at
home most of the time: painting her nails, having tea with friends, or lying in
the sun by the swimming pool. The swimming pool was very nearby the room, which
is why I had to keep very quiet. My sister felt bad about locking me in there,
but she had no alternative. I couldn’t even play the radio, so she brought me
books, old magazines and newspapers from the white people. I just read every
single thing I came across: Fair Lady,
Woman’s Weekly, anything. But then my sister thought I was reading too
much.
‘What kind of wife will you
make if you can’t even make baby
clothes, or knit yourself a jersey? I suppose you will marry an educated man
like yourself, who won’t mind going to bed with a book and an empty stomach.’
We would play cards at
night when she knocked off (finished with work), and listen to the radio,
singing along softly with the songs we liked.
Then I got this temporary
job in a clothing factory in town. I looked forward to meeting new people and
liked the idea of being out of that room for a change. The factories made
clothes for ladies’ boutiques (small shops selling fashionable clothes).
The whole place was full of
machines of all kinds. Some people were sewing, others were ironing with big
heavy irons that pressed with a lot of steam. I had to cut all the loose threads that hang after a dress or a
jacket is finished. As soon as a number of dresses in a certain style was
finished, they would be sent to me and I had to count them, write the number
down, and then start with the cutting of threads. I was fascinated to
discover that one person made only sleeves, another the collars and so on,
until the last lady put all the pieces together, sewed on buttons or whatever
was necessary to finish.
Most people at the factory
spoke Sotho, but they were nice to me – they tried to speak to me in Zulu or
Xhosa, and they gave me all kinds of advice on things I didn’t know. There was
this girl, Gwendolene – she thought I was very stupid. She called me a ‘bari’(a
fool) because I always sat inside the changing room with something to read when
it was time to eat my lunch, instead of going outside to meet guys. She told me
it was cheaper to get myself a ‘lunch boy’ – somebody to buy me lunch. She told
me it was wise not to sleep with him, because than I could dump him anytime I
wanted to. I was very nervous about such things. I thought it was better to be
a ‘bari’ than to be stabbed by a city boy for his money.
The factory knocked off at
four-thirty, and then I went to a park near where my sister worked. I waited
there till half past six, when I could sneak into the house again without the
white people seeing me. I had to leave the house before half past five in the
mornings as well. That meant I had to find something to do with the time I had
before I could catch the seven-thirty bus to work – about two hours. I would go
to a public toilet in the park. For some reason it was never locked, so I would
go in and sit on the toilet seat and read some magazine or other until the
right time to catch the bus.
The first time I went into
the toilet, I was on my way to the bus stop. Usually, I went straight to
the bust stop outside OK Bazaars, where
it was well lit and I could see. I would wait there, reading or just looking at
the growing number of cars and buses on their way to town. On this day, it was
raining quite hard, so I thought I would shelter in the toilet until the rain
passed. I knocked first to see if there was anybody inside. As there was no
reply, I pushed the door open and went in. It smelled a little – dryish kind of
smell, as if the toilet was not used all that often. But it was quite clean
compared to many ‘Non-European’ (an apartheid government term for black people)
toilets I knew. The floor was painted red and the walls were cream-white. It
did not look like it had been painted for a few years. I stood looking around,
with the rain coming down very hard on the zinc: (sinkplaat – corrugated iron)
roof. The noise was comforting – to know I had escaped the wet, only a few
heavy drops had got me. The plastic bag in which I carried my book, purse and
neatly folded pink handkerchief was a little damp, but that was because I had used
it to cover my head when I ran to the toilet. I pulled my dress down a little
so that it would not get creased when I sat down. The closed lid of that toilet
was going to be my seat for many mornings after that.
I was really lucky to have
found that toilet, because the winter was very cold. Not that it was any warmer
in there, but once I’d closed the door it was at least a little less windy.
Also, the toilet was very small – the walls were wonderfully close to me – it
felt like it was made to fit me alone. I enjoyed that kind of privacy. I did a
lot of thinking while I sat on that toilet seat. I did a lot of daydreaming too
– many times imagining myself in some big hall doing a really popular play with
other young actors. At school, we took set books like Busoni kuBawo or A Man for All Seasons and made school
plays which we toured to the other schools on weekends. I loved it very much.
When I was even younger, I had done little sketches (short plays) taken from
the Bible and on big days like Good Friday, we acted and sang happily.
I would sit there dreaming…
I was getting bored with
the books I was reading – the love stories all sounded the same, and besides
that I just lost interest. I started
asking myself why I had not written anything since I left school. At least at
school, I had written a few poems or stories for the school magazine, school
competitions or other magazines like Bona
and Inkqubela. Our English teacher
was always so encouraging; I remembered the day I showed him my first poem – I
was excited I couldn’t concentrate in class for the whole day. I didn’t know
anything about publishing then, and I didn’t ask myself if my stories were good
enough. I just enjoyed writing things down when I had the time. So one Friday,
after I’d started being that toilet’s best customer, I bought myself a notebook in which I was hoping to write
something. I didn’t use it for quite a while; until one evening…
My sister had taken her
usual Thursday afternoon off, and she had been delayed somewhere. I came back
from work, then waited in the park for the right time to go back into the yard.
The white people always had their supper at six-thirty and that was the time I
used to steal my way in (quietly go in without being noticed) without
disturbing them or being seen. My comings and goings had to be secret, because
they still didn’t know I stayed there.
Then I realised that my sister hadn’t come back. I was scare
to go out again, in case something was wrong this time, so I decided to sit
down in front of my sister’s room, where I thought I wouldn’t be noticed.
I was reading a copy of Drum Magazine and hoping that she would
come back soon – before the dogs sniffed me out. For the first time, I realised
how stupid it was of me not to have cut myself a spare key long ago. I kept on
hearing noises that sounded like the gate opening. A few times, I was sure I
had heard her footsteps on the concrete steps leading to the servants’ quarters, but each time it turned out to be
something or someone else.
I was trying hard to
concentrate on my reading again, when I
heard the two dogs playing, chasing each other nearer and nearer to where I was
sitting. And then they were in front of me, looking as surprised as I was. For
a brief moment we stared at each other, then they started to bark at me. I was
sure they would tear me to pieces if I moved just one finger, so I sat very
still, trying not to look at them, while my heart pounded and my mouth went dry
as paper.
They barked even louder
when the dogs from next door joined in, glaring at me through the openings in
the hedge. Then the Madam’s high-pitched voice rang out above the dog’s
barking.
`Ireeeeeene!’ That’s my
sister’s English name, which we never use. I couldn’t move or answer the call –
the dogs were standing right in front of me, their teeth threateningly long.
When there was no reply, she came to see what was going on.
`Oh, it’s you? Hello.’ She
was smiling at me, chewing that gum which never left her mouth, instead of
calling the dogs away from me. They had stopped barking, but they hadn’t moved
– they were still growling at me, waiting for her to tell them what to do.
‘Please Madam, the dogs
will bit me,’ I pleaded, not moving my eyes from them.
‘No, they won’t bite you.’
Then she spoke to them nicely, ‘Get away now – go on,’ and they went off.
She was like a doll,
her hair almost orange in colour, all
curls round her made-up face. Her eyelashes fluttered like a doll’s.
Her thin lips were bright red, like her long nails, and she wore very
high-heeled shoes. She was still smiling; I wondered if it didn’t hurt after a
while. When her friends came for a swim, I could always here her forever
laughing at something or other.
She scared me – I couldn’t
understand how she could smile like that but not want me to stay in her house.
‘When did you com e in? We
didn’t see you.’
‘I’ve been here for some
time now – my sister isn’t here. I’m waiting to talk to her.’
‘Oh – she’s not here?’ She
was laughing, for no reason that I could see. ‘I can give her a message – you
can go home – I’ll tell her that you want to see her.’
Once I was outside the
gate, I didn’t know what to do or where to go. I walked slowly, kicking my heels. The street lights were
so very bright!. Like big eyes staring at me. (simile) I wondered what the
people who saw me thought I was doing, walking around at that time of the
night. But then I didn’t really care, because there wasn’t much I could do
about the situation right then. I was just thinking how things had to go wrong
on that day particularly, because my sister and I were not on such good terms.
Early that morning, when the alarm had gone for me to wake up, I did not jump
to turn it off, so my sister got really angry with me. She had gone on about me
always leaving it to ring for too long, as if it was set for her, not for me.
And when I went out to wash, I had left the door open a second too long and
that was enough to earn me another scolding.
Every morning I had to wake
up straight away, roll my bedding and put it under the bed where my sister was
sleeping. I was not supposed to put on the light, although it was still dark.
I’d light up a candle and tiptoe my way out with a soup dish and a toothbrush.
My clothes were on a hanger on a nail at the back of the door. I’d take the
hanger and close the door as quietly as I could. Everything had to be set ready
the night before. A basin full of cold water was also ready outside the door,
put there because the sound of running water and the loud screech (high-pitched
noise – skree geluid) the taps made in the morning could wake up the white
people, and they would wonder what my sister was doing up so early. I’d do everything and be off the
premises (erf – area house and garden is on) by five-thirty with my shoes in my
bag – I only put them on once I was safely out of the gate. And that
gate made such a noise too.
Many times I wished I could
jump over it and save myself all that sickening careful-careful business!
Thinking about all these
things took my mind away from the
biting cold of the night (Personification) and my wet nose, until I saw
my sister walking towards me.
‘Mholo ( hello in Xhosa),
what are you doing outside in the street?’ she greeted me. I quickly briefed
(informed her) on what had happened.
‘Oh Yehovah! You can be so dumb
sometimes! What were you doing inside in the first place? You know you should
have waited for me so we could walk in together. Then I could say you were
visiting or something. Now, you tell me, what am I supposed to say to them if
they see you come in again? Hayi (isiXhosa for No)!’
She walked angrily towards
the gate, with me hesitantly following her. When she opened the gate, she tuned
to me with an impatient whisper.
‘And now? Why don’t you
come in, stupid?’
I mumbled my apologies, and
followed her in. By some miracle, no one seemed to have noticed us. We quickly munched
a snack of cold chicken and boiled potatoes and drank our tea, hardly on
speaking terms. I wanted to just howl like a dog. I wished somebody would come
and be my friend, and tell me that I was not useless, and that my sister did
not hate me, and that one day I would have a nice place to live … anything. It
would have been really great to have someone my own age to talk to. But I also knew
that my sister was worried for me and she was scared of her employers. If they were
to find out that I lived with her, they would fire her , and then we would both
be walking up and down the streets. My R11.00 wages weren’t going to help us at
all. I don’t know how long I lay like that , unable to fall asleep, just
wishing and wishing as the ears ran into my ears.
The next morning, I woke up
long before the alarm went off, but I just lay there, feeling tired and
depressed. If there had been a way out, I wouldn’t have gone to work. But there
was also this other strong feeling or longing inside me. It was some kin of
pain, that pushed me to do everything at double speed and run off to my toilet.
I call it ‘my toilet’ because that is exactly how I felt about it. It was very
rarely tat I ever saw anybody else go in there in the mornings. It was as if
they all knew I was using it, and they had to lay off or something. When I went
there, I didn’t really expect to find it occupied.
I felt my spirits lifting
as I put on my shoes outside the gate. I made sure that my notebook was in my
bag. In my haste, I even forgot my lunch-box, but it didn’t matter. I was
walking faster and my feet were feeling lighter all the time. Then I noticed that
the door had been painted and that a new window pane had replaced the old
broken one. I smiled to myself as I reached the door. Before long, I was
sitting on that toilet seat, writing a poem.
Many more mornings saw me
sitting there, writing. Sometimes it did not need to be a poem; I wrote
anything that came into my head – in the same way I would have done if I’d had
a friend to talk to. I remember some days when I felt like I was hiding
something from my sister. She didn’t know about my toilet in the park and she
was not in the least interested in my notebook.
Then, one morning, I wanted
to write a story about what had happened at work the day before; the supervisor
screaming at me for not calling her when I’d seen people stealing two dresses at
lunchtime. I had found it really funny. I had to write about it and I just
hoped there were enough pages left in my notebook. It all came to me and I was
smiling when I reached for the door; but it wouldn’t open – it was locked! I
think for the first time, I accepted that the toilet was not mine after all…
Slowly I walked over to a
bench nearby, watched the early spring sun come up, and wrote my story anyway.
1) Why did her mother think it
was a waste of money educating her?
2) Why was she locked in her
sister’s room all day?
3) What was her job at the
clothing factory?
4) Why did she have to leave
before 5:30 am?
5) Why was she sitting on the
step outside when the dogs barked at her?
6) Mention TWO reasons why her
sister’s employer reminded her of a doll.
7) In what circumstances do
you ‘kick your heels’?
8) What figure of speech is
‘the biting cold of the night’?
9) Why is ‘The toilet’ a
better title for this story than ‘The park’? She found the toilet much more
special than the park. The toilet became her special place, her own private
space.
Analysis
Character
The narrator – just
finished matric. Came to Johannesburg to visit and stayed on to find a job.
The narrator’s sister,
Irene – is a domestic servant in Orange Grove. Has a little room she stays in,
in the backyard.
The Madam – young, paints
her nails all day, have friends over for tea, swims at swimming pool
Two dogs – patrol the
property
Gwendolene – told the
narrator to get a lunch boy. She mustn’t read during lunch.
A day in the life of the narrator
v Alarm goes of very early
v Roll up bedding put it
under sister’s bed
v Go out with soap dish and
toothbrush
v Get clothes from back of
door
v Wash in basin of cold water
outside
v Leave premises before 5:30
with shoes in hand.
v Sit in empty toilet reading
and writing until bus is almost at bus stop
v Go to OK Bazaar to get on
bus at 7:30
v Go to Clothing factory
v Counts dresses, write down
number and cut off threads.
v Sits in changing room
during lunch time.
v Stops working at 16:30(4:30)
v Waits in park for sister to
finish work at 18:30(6:30)
v Sneaks into house without
white people seeing her
v Have supper and tea
v Goes to bed
